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Meghan Winkler's avatar

Great advice! I especially love the tip about how to reveal back story. I’ve always struggled with that.

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Tommy Dean's avatar

I’m so glad it was helpful!

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Inga Jones's avatar

Love these examples! Actually reading Knife River now.

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Tommy Dean's avatar

oooh nice! That one has a great opening! She has a new book coming out soonish!

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Patty Tomsky's avatar

So so good. I’m running out to my Word doc now! Thanks!

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Tommy Dean's avatar

I’m so glad you enjoyed it!

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Heather Bell Adams's avatar

So great! Thank you

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Tommy Dean's avatar

Thank you for reading!

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Little Writing Corner's avatar

Fabulous examples. Thank you.

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Tommy Dean's avatar

Thank you for reading!

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Andrew Careaga's avatar

Some terrific tips here!

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Tommy Dean's avatar

Thank you for reading!

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